My Angel

Love how you rhymed great with orchestrate, but I was especially impressed by the last 4 lines and how you split them up. I didn't notice the rhymes in them, but they were there creating smoothness and flow. That's the goal, right? Good write.

This poem is great! I can feel many things from it! Remembering that God always has a plan!

I enjoyed it and can relate to the feelings.
Perhaps the critic commenting above needs some age on him to understand.

The first two lines were good, i loved the rhymes

"As I sit and wonder about this day.
I kneel to God and begin to pray."

but from then on, it was a little bumpy!
but you got the writing skills in you

Another nice poem Theresa!