Scarlet Wings & Charcoal Scars

by Kakera   May 13, 2014


2014-05-13 02:03 AM

Daylight died as the twilight drew closer;
with every breath she forced out
butterflies dripped from her split tongue
and the clock stopped ticking,
as if perpetuating the dark hour
would stop destiny's scythe

When she promised me unconditional love,
I became like a bull in a china shop:
stumbling over her shallow wishes
breaking the stained glass floor
with razor-sharp stiletto heels
dressed in rainbows and diamond smiles

She turned me into a dream-dancer,
moving beyond disconnected false realities
to the beat of her heartbeat closer --
showing me the truth of fatalism
as her scarlet wings sprouted
from the charcoal scars on her back

She grabbed my aching hands
and spirited me away
from the pointless and hollow
dreamless, sleepless, painful land of lies
that had always wounded us both
whenever we had to force a smile --

She took me to infinity and flew right by
the ashes of phoenix universes reincarnating
the true goddess from the underworld,
and painted mountains of corpses piled
to make me realize that even
Gods and Ghosts must die

We landed on the ivory tower
that we built from scarred dead skin,
and stacks of gold crowns and bronze swords
piled as bricks glimmering with devoted glue:
and I saw the evanescent shines reflected
in her eyes solemnly sworn to witness my rebirth

Because all I knew before meeting her
was the dread of monotonous everyday life
and hopes of magic breaking the mundane
through my sleepless state of gray mind, blind;
at the time I knew neither love nor hate
because I was always stuck in between

And then I finally knew what she meant
when she said that we were entangled
in the pure white spider web
woven from the threads of fate:

because when her wings embraced me
and her lithe body echoed mine,
she kissed me for the first time
and I knew that I wanted to be stuck
in this disconnected and dreamy eternity

For despite that even Gods and Ghosts must perish
we made our love too strong to ever die

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  • 9 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    O.o OMG this is an awesome write!!!!

    You've got chops!!!

    Beautiful word choice and flow....Epic!!

  • 9 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is wonderful I really love the use of imagery :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Hellon

    Ok...first of all it was long and...not the type of poem I would normally comment on because fantasy is not really my scene but...there was just something about this that pulled me in and yes...I did read it to the end..surprising myself :) It was extremely well written and that's what grabbed me in to start with and...just something held me there. I'm nominating this because...I would like others, who are perhaps more into this style to read and give you more feedback....I like it, just can't fully explain why...:)

    • 9 years ago

      by Kakera

      Thank you so much for both reading to the end, especially because of it usually being out of your character! And even more so, thank you for your kind words, they make me very happy, and I'm glad that I managed to pull you in! I can relate to not being able to explain either, because I can't really explain how I wrote this piece myself, it sort of just happened, it was like I was in a trance -- dreaming even, while fully awake, and my fingers moving without guidance. It's really strange, and not what I write nor even how, but amazingly fun! Thanks again =)

  • 9 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Holy Moly this is beautiful!!! Just beautiful!

    • 9 years ago

      by Kakera

      Thank you so much Andrea!