Flower O Flower

by Jyoti Rawat   Jun 4, 2014


Flower O flower,
So many bees around you,

Flower O flower
Shower of your fragrance
Take me to your closer,

Flower O flower
Morning dew makes
you beautiful forever,

Flower O Flower
I want be honey bee to fly around you
Forever.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Nicely Penned!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This piece is beautiful and you used repetition to your advantage, but i have to say that the flow really wasnt that easy to follow. otherwise great piece.

  • 9 years ago

    by Mohan

    Beautiful poem.
    I think the beauty of flowers is Nature's painting.
    nothing is soft more than a flower.

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Flowers are not only beautiful they attract so many things big and small. I like the feel of this poem as well as the simplicity..good one.

  • 9 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Flowers are beautiful. I like the "flower o flower" repetition. Though I felt like I wanted to read more about what you were telling to the flowers. Overall I like it. There a few grammar issues but they can be fix.

    Take me to your closer? <-- this is how it's in your poem.

    Did you mean? "Take me to you closer?"

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