Existance of a shadowless angels.

Judging Comment:

There is much to take from this poem, I don't
even know where to start. It also points out the
limitations of writing a poem versus a story/novel.

We try hard to keep the message, make it a
smooth read and at the same time add meaning to
a poem; whereas a novel gives the reader access
to everything. But there are still some secrets that
not all writes can bring out nor label a person saying this is how she/he lived or is. There is depth to this write and the writer's voice can be heard. My
favorite line in this:

Life is never a fully explained poetry,
that's why they write novels of it.

Loved this read.

Congrats on winning a HM for this write!

Beautiful.

Awesome piece Shanky,

love the tone of this piece,

nominated

good luck

Hmmm, Shanky, you got it. Just a smoke explains what it means. Shinning while ugly, walking while stagnant. Life is unquantifable