Enlightened Soul

by Michael D Nalley   Jul 29, 2014


Would you agree ,
we can change
our minds if we
have the heart
to how it was meant
to be from the start,
if that is our sacred goal
from darkness to depart,
yet only Light changes a soul.

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  • 11 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    That's perfect :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    How about Only God can change a soul?

  • 11 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    Everything flowed till the last sentence in my mind I don't know if that was the best way to end the poem I like the message don't get me wrong and I agree with you via poem but the last line didn't end it great it was good but it could've been better and also the center setting would've helped too but that's just me :)

    -Bet

  • 11 years ago

    by gloria

    Simple but urgent message

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