The Stairway to Heaven

by Everlasting   Sep 8, 2014


O rain, O rain, who ever often greets my days,
And in my garden, showers joy upon my flowers,
I see your raindrops fall like enigmatic feathers
descending on my lawn while alluring my gaze.

And yes, o rain, you captivate my ears as well.
Thus when I hear your droplets fall outside my window,
I look towards the sky in awe, with mucho gusto,
for having heard your melody, your magic spell.

And yes, o rain, you also take away my stress.
Though if I may, I must confess, that when you come,
It feels like heaven's doors appeared above my home,
as if the angels danced to form a clouded mess,

more like a mass of plumage cluttered in midair.
And I, o rain, can't help but watch it from my room,
It's like their wings are shaking, spraying their perfume,
or rather, spattering their plumes to form a stair:

some sort of ladder for the dead to see then climb,
where they could rise and later shine when they meet God.
Though to my eyes, I only see your drops, not God..
I only see what I can see according to my time:

a clouded sky that I supposed that angels formed,
as to create a port, a passageway, to the unknown.

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And yes, O rain, I must confess, that when you come
It's like your drops are feathers from an angel's wing,
but also that when I hear you, I hear the angels sing.

Sept 7, 2014

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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    This gave me Goosebumps. Wow

  • 9 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Love the title- Reminds of the song... I read this poem in silence and then I read it with the song playing, you really should read this while the song is playing, IT ROCKS!

    This nature poem takes a new level of creativity.. it reads like a sonnet with the flow... Perhaps maybe the author meant to create a sonnet from the beginning? Either way I was taken back by its beauty.. the rhythm is what amazes me... just magical! The sounds of rain and comforting tones can be heard, felt and expressed.

    Everlasting has rocked the Nature category this week with this poem! Top poem this week in my opinion~

  • 9 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    An excellent write on the gift of nature.You make it sound as perfect a heavenly bliss.

    The living enjoy it as a magic spell,while the deceased climb on these drops and reach their heavenly abode.
    'a clouded sky that I supposed the angels formed,
    as to create a port, a passageway, to the unknown.

    Beautiful imagery with feathers of the angel's wing.......Loved it immensely.

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    There is a cooling and a warm effect one can feel while
    reading this poem. Nature is not only beautiful but a soother to all our hearts...nice write dear :)

  • 9 years ago

    by sham pulok

    Very nice