Letting you In

by Beautiful Tragedy   Oct 28, 2014


Letting you in wasn't easy,
But i decided to do it anyway,
As i sit at this dreaded table,
Thinking of what else to say.
You found the chinks in my armor,
You found the hole in my stone wall,
And little by little, as I trusted you more and more,
My stones began to fall.
At first i thought you'd freak out,
Thought you'd up and walk away,
But despite what I am used to,
You've been around even after i told you that day.
Nobody's ever really stuck around,
They've all made excuses of why they had to leave,
They beat and abused and abandoned me,
Pain was all I had received.
So I put up a wall and blocked everything out,
Hoping nobody could get through,
At first it all seemed to work out for me,
Until I was sent away and met you.
At first I let you in slowly,
Being cautious on the way,
You're so damn perfect; you have no idea,
I don't care what people say.
You say I'm pretty,
You think I'm kind,
But you have no idea what's on the inside,
I need to move on but what if I can't leave it behind?
What you think matters to me,
When your upset so am I,
I don't want to lose you,
Can you promise to not say goodbye?
Can you promise to do your best?
To cheer me up when I am down,
Can you promise to be there for me?
To save me before I drown?
Will you promise to take care of me?
To pick me up when I fall down,
To love me for who I am, even as your kiddo,
To wipe away my frown?
If there were more people like you in the world,
What a great world this would be,
I'm trusting you to understand, even in hard times,
I'm trusting you to take care of me.
Can you? Will you?
Please??

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  • 7 years ago

    by Michael

    Wonderful wonder of poetic beauty :)

    Amazing to read

    Michael x

  • 7 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Awesome write, I've said this on a few poems recently but with long write my concentration tends to wake and my brain gets bored but this kept it going right until the end, the meter was spot on and word choice and flow etc was great.

    I like poetry that has a kinda questioning theme to it, it makes the reader really think about the poem and can't help but reflect on their own life and ultimately as writers that what we want aside from releasing our inner demon's.

    Great write!

    Ben

    • 7 years ago

      by Beautiful Tragedy

      Thanks Ben. God, I wrote this one forever ago but like every other write of mine, I still know the story behind it.
      I appreciate your feedback and understanding. You always seem to be of some help.

  • 9 years ago

    by John Doe

    I like this poem, it's so real like I can feel it from within!!

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