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This poem is really attractively written....

Generally most love poems have the same all ramblings same old cliches but this poem......
This poem is different..
I like the choice of your words... It's very unique

The very first sentence of your poem... My clock stops at midnight..... Is extremely creative. Truthfully I've never read a love poem as good as this one. So unique.

And the last line...... That is creative too.... Comparison of memories with sour grapes. Although these memories are site you still hold them sweet....

So very well written...

Keep sharing.

Well penned !!!!

In hope to see the lost love again.It is difficult for the writer to let go the fond memories of the loved one.Life seems to come to a halt.

'but you know,I am still standing where you left me.
For I believe one day you'll turn back."

Love is hard to forget and the person who gave that love is even more harder to forget! This write has pain, fond memories and moments which the writer is unable to forget.

Sorry I can not forget you,
because your memories are not soured grapes.

^^I like this ending. For sour grapes are something can be forgotten after tasting it; yet your love for this person is something that cannot be forgotten or let go off..touching.

Hmmmmmmmmmmm
Great i know ur feeling, these are true feeling.
But its life go forward.

Hmmmmmmmmmmm
Great i know ur feeling, these are true feeling.
But its life go forward.