Lost in sea

by Midnight suicide   Dec 3, 2014


Sometimes I feel like I am lost in the sea
My sails to the waves so they can take me
Down to the depths or back to the top
With no where to go and no were to stop
But into the darkness and out of the light
I have lost the battle I have lost the fight
I used all my lives I went in too deep
My ship is going under I can finally go to sleep.

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  • 9 years ago

    by girl

    I liked your poem. The only thing I noticed were certain grammatical errors such as "were" should be "where" and "to" should be "too". I'm Not trying to be a grammar Nazi as everyone makes mistakes. Just trying to be helpful. :)

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