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by Sunshine   Jan 8, 2015


I want to breathe you in
like a drug in the air;
trap you deep within my chest.

Shut those bare eyes;
stripped of sight and vision,
to see nothing but the light
you weave.

Blind me- transfixed,
as I wish to feel nothing,
but the alluring warmth
in your breath.

I'm knocked down, addicted-
oh how you dazzle me!

by: Rania Moallem

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  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A sensual piece with some great imagery. I particularly like the idea of eyes being closed off to everything but this metaphorical light that is oh-so-real when you feel like this about someone!

    Great piece, Rania

    • 6 years ago

      by Sunshine

      oh Ben, you took me few years back! thank you <3

  • 10 years ago

    by Mayday

    ^__^
    Oo lala *Giggle* this is a very em...enticing poem, very cute in one way and alluring in another. c:
    A blend of adoration, love & lust if I'm not mistaken o:

    Lovely :)

  • 10 years ago

    by GB

    I liked this poem, much more than the first poem, Nana. Here the heating passion could be felt withing every line.

    ~I'm knocked down, addicted-
    oh how you dazzle me!
    ^^^Check this:
    ~ knocked down, I'm addicted-
    oh how you dazzle me!
    ^^Just a suggestion... Interesting read.

    Write on~

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