Thoughts, reflected. (Sedoka)

by GB   Feb 16, 2015


Reflected.

Innocently, he
attempted to quench thirst of
Neruda's wan carnations.

Sardonically
found guilty, reaping barren
philosophy of Eluard...

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** The Sedoka is an unrhymed poem made up of two three-line katauta with the following syllable counts: 5/7/7, 5/7/7. A Sedoka, pair of katauta as a single poem, may address the same subject from differing perspectives.

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  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    It is like a person going out in search for something but then finds himself enlightened by it. I take it there is some history or something else behind this message more then what I can grasp. Good job with the form.

  • 10 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very Nicely Penned GB!!!

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