A cry for help - Modern Senryu

by Everlasting Feb 25, 2015 category : Life, society / inspirational

A pen wobbles
at the edge of a wooden desk
yearning for a hand

Written by: L.L.
February 24, 2015

report violation

3

Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

10 years ago
by Jyoti Rawat

It is nicely written but i did t get it correct meaning.
10 years ago
by GB

I suppose you mean Senryu that doesn't follow the strict syllable count 5/7/5.

Beautifully penned piece, Luce. Writing about writing is always interesting.
- 10 years ago
  by Everlasting
  
  Hi GB,
  
  Yeah, a modern Senryu is a haiku/Senryu that has either 17 syllables or less. thank you for reading.