Sleepless

I will say it again your writing style and scheme are so unique that I am in awe of them m. Your vocab and visuals make your poems come alive and I feel them. I fee the emotion. When you're sad, I am. When you're happy, I am.

Em

Beautiful written

One thing I always love and respect about your poem is that you seem to always paint your words so freely and effortlessly. You always center around flowers which tells me that even though the world is going to hell around you, you can see the beauty in it, also love how you make the flowers your main focus point and sometimes character. Ugh this poem though redefines what it means to feel pain and happiness at the same time. Dashiel, you create a sad piece ( and there is no doubt this is a sad piece) but the reader gets to linger and find the deeper meaning inside. I always love how authors can put a part of their soul onto a poem, but yet still have the reader guessing about what is that after effect. Yes here there is tragic loss. But at the same time flowers seem to comfort you and that is the beauty part. I can keep going on and on, but I don't want to bore you. The point is that this is an amazing poem. 5/5

A painter of words,beautiful Dashiel !!!!

Beautiful dashiel!!!