At times we get hurt and heart broken. We learn from the mistake and find good memories to fill the hole left. It's healthy to speak it out and just try and move on as quickly as possible. For the past, many dwell, they forego the happiness in their future and let anger consume them, their time, their life, the happiness they are suppose to be enjoy come past them as it turn into memories.

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Alas, you just left
me feeling like a
fool, waiting, and
wasting my life pinning
for something that
I never had a claim to.

This stanza brought back memories and made me feel like I relate to it.
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The poem is great, I like that you chose to let go.

So simply said.. but so amazingly powerful

A sad and heartfelt write. Well penned.

Thank god we can always turn to poetry to vent, express our feelings and just to feel better.

This is very heartfelt Mori, thank you very much for sharing this read :)

"Alas, you just left
me feeling like a
fool, waiting, and
wasting my life pinning
for something that
I never had a claim to.

Did it make you proud
to ignore all my messages?"

Girrlllllllll. This write is phenomenal! I wish I would have seen it sooner. It makes my heart hurt because I know what you are referencing here... but you stuck the ending, his loss :)

Maybe its just my emotional state, but i read it as a letter to a disinterested and blase god who ignores all his peoples calls.

but thats just my opinion.
a brilliant write by the way, love the format

Well Penned..

This piece to me is why poetry means so much.

Its always helps to get your feelings down onto paper and poetry makes an art form out of it. (which btw is this one)

full of emotion!
Loved it!

"Alas, you just left
me feeling like a
fool, waiting, and
wasting my life pinning
for something that
I never had claim to."

I know this feeling so well..
Reading this pulled some heart strings for me.
But in such a beautiful way, wonderfully written.
Loved it.