White Candles ( Waltz Wave)

by Everlasting   Jul 18, 2015


White
candles
white
candles
walk with me
tranquil
still
hold me
feel the stars
the tides ebbing
back and forth
splish splash
like
the waves
in our hearts
swaying
us
towards
love

Pattern syllable: 1, 2, 1, 2, 3, 2, 1, 2, 3, 4, 3, 2, 1, 2, 3, 2, 1, 2, 1

The above poetry form was introduced to us by GB. Thanks it was fun to attempt this form.

There's a thread that was started if you wish to share interesting forms, here is the link to that forum:

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/discussion/topic.html?topic_id=144740

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  • 8 years ago

    by GB

    I have just seen this, tenderly beautiful. A very lovely piece from you :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I think I've heard of this poetry style before...nonetheless I like what you have written. Its soothing as well as inviting!