This Love like a Dove

by Everlasting   Sep 29, 2015


I cannot write of love when I am in love.
I cannot write of you.
I cannot write of me,
Nor can I write about us when I'm in love.

It's just that this love...
( this love of mine )

It becomes like a dove.
That flies up high. That flies up above.
That lifts me up, That raises me high.
And makes me sit upon clouds of lust,
that then dissolve
and make me fall.

( Oh and I fall.
I fall deeply in love )

Until it spreads its wings and starts to soar.
Until it levitates. Until it floats.
Until its wings regain control.
Until this love, this love of mine, that is like a dove,
captures me,

until it mesmerizes me,
until it seizes me

until all that's left of me
is my heart, my mind , and my soul
being slowly and safely left
well grounded
on the reality
that this love
is seen by both of us
as your hand reaches mine
as my hand reaches yours
as we both feel the dove,
with our fingers
intertwined,
land
on our hands.

Then I stop falling from up above,
Then I start walking on this reality
that we are here
letting our love fly
free

Then I can write about love when I'm in love.
I can write about you.
I can write about me.
I can write about us.

Written by: L.L.

June 22, 2015

Final Edit Sept 29, 2015

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  • 8 years ago

    by Koan

    Oh, this id definitely a love song!!! Someone should write music to it... So beautiful!!!

    Thx for the read!!!

    • 8 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Thank you! I think I need to learn to play an instrument so I may write the music to some of my poems. that would be fun and challenging at the same. I would need someone to sing them though, I doubt I could ever learn to sing.

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Its hard at first because we are not sure whether this love is going to last or not. We give it time and space and once reality has sunk into the heart; it confirms and lets it go. The freedom to write, to speak without saying much and to know deep inside this is it.

    This piece is so personal and filled with a self assurance, of a woman who knows what is life really is about...nicely penned :)