Comments : Outcast

  • 3 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    No matter the friends, family members around us we still feel like an outcast. For each individual has his/her own battle to fight, things to achieve and questions to answer. Till the time come for us we just have to complete our purpose and fulfill our goals...nicely penned Cindy...take care.

  • 3 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Even sadness has so much purity in it. Everything written is coming from heart & that's where it pinches while reading.
    Death will not take our beliefs away or the impression that we leave behind.
    Time to celebrate the breaths we have :)

    Loved your poem & congrats again for winning the contest :)

    all the best & take care

  • 3 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    We can be amongst friends or family and still feel like we don't belong. We all have a purposes in life we may not know what exactly it is at times but keep on going and fulfill your dreams and goals. A sad and we'll penned write. Take care

  • 3 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A fully deserved win Cindy and a truly excellent write - well done on this and great to see you with a new poem posted to your account.
    Take care and I hope you are well,
    Ben

  • 3 years ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hello Cindy,

    A well executed poem, showing pained emotion from personal experience.

    Well done,

    Take care,

    Michael
    ((Hugs))
    XxX

  • 3 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Outstanding poem. It sent chills up my spine what some of us must endure in this life. Keep up the great writing.

    Ben thompson

  • 3 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Congrats on the win! I knew it was a good one! Very well structured, with perfect rhythm and rhyme scheme! Emotional and poignant to read!

  • 3 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Always a masterpiece work! Congrats Cindy!

    Cheers,
    Ray

  • 3 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Hey Cindy,
    Congrats on the win, nice to see you back...
    Loved the flow on this, the rhythm was smooth, just the right pace to draw out the emotion...truly a great piece
    Love
    xx

  • 3 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Congratulations Dear....very well deserved win :)

    Keep writing :)

  • 3 years ago

    by Alvaro Palacios

    Excellent. thank you for this written piece.

  • 3 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judging comment

    Cindy writes from her heart and soul and this poem made me cry. Just a heart warming poem that touches the reader.

    Each line allows the reader to feel her tears, fear and emotions.. just heart gripping!

    PS....love you :-(

  • 3 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Last poem of my mother's I ever got to hear. She knew she didn't have much time left when she wrote this. 5 short weeks later she lost consciousness and passed there after. Reading it now brings a lot of emotion forth.

    • 2 years ago

      by Gem

      I've just popped onto the site out of nostalgia and Cindy was someone who truly helped me grow as a writer. She was a pure legend and I'm so sorry for your loss x

  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Reading this 2 years on has brought me a lump to my throat. I miss you, Cindy. x

  • 10 months ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Miss You Yaar...