I pull it out

by Everlasting   Dec 27, 2015


They said, a piece of advice...

"Write with your heart"

So with my hands in between my sternum,
and with all my might,
I rippped open my chest
to pull my heart out.

Then I wrote with it,
Until I died.

L.L.

Dec 27, 2015

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  • 8 years ago

    by Cindy

    Wow! What a mind bender you have portrayed in this piece.

    Great!
    Take care
    Cindy
    *hugs

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    The imagery and imagination in this are both horrid and excellent! lol. I enjoyed this thoroughly.
    My only suggestion is "I ripped open my chest" rather than "I rip-opened my chest"

    Well done and all the very best,
    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Lol, thank you Ben.

      Suggestion, taken.

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