Dec 1 - Nothing but a Shell

by Everlasting   Jan 30, 2016


I came to be nothing but a shell
swayed by ocean waves
to and fro, to and fro,
landing on a shore,
close to palms, under the sun

Dec 1, 2015

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  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    Fantastic imagery here. I could clearly see the boyant shell being washed in and out by the tide, until...

    It rests in what you neatly paint: an idealic sunny beach. The title makes this reader think this beach maybe part of a deserted island. A perfect private place to take time and rest.

    Excellent.

    Take care,

    Michael

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