Close Sharp Eyes

by Ramon The SunStone Haupt   Aug 7, 2016

When I delighted in the tele world,
Dancing forever it seemed.
To the light crushing the dark,
So the priest blessed my eyes.

My closed eyes I now live by,
The jedi bohemian gone, I wonder why.
Now I look for attention,
Losing work's grip, where's my election.

So my drunk father fishes away,
Thinking to end it all to my mom's anger.
And my brother's soul of danger,
So I wonder and carry on.


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  • 4 years ago

    by stormingdance (Jessica)

    Interesting world play, but to be honest, I'm not 100% sure of the subject you intended, though my imagination has filled in some holes so I had a story nonetheless.

    • 4 years ago

      by Ramon The SunStone Haupt

      Yeah definitly, thanks for the comment, I do not want to lead any of my readers to go astray with my work, but all in all the essence and art of poetry :) I'll try and be on point next time.

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