Hello Cupid's aim cannot always be on target can it? This poem shows that - an arrow off target and hitting a man's brain and not his heart can have the affect of lust on the brain, instead of love in the heart.

A good write,

Take care with all those flying arrows, you never know where they might land!

Michael

Your randomness is really beautiful, Ms. Lucero! Haha.

Lucero, random or not this is beautiful and so sad because it's a tale of loving and sending love to the wrong people or place is head instead of heart. All I can say is it's a good job it wasn't his pants lol..

Love is tough and I'm still trying to figure it out.
Em

Random?? No its simply life and your gift of writing! A skill to be admired!!

Judging Comment

This pretty little love poem is fun and full of flare.. It has a unique placement..

I really adore this poem..The ending grabs the heart..

Luce, Luce, Luce I love the way you write....as I always said ,I'm a fan. ..lol.. This is stunning
here's my 5/5 for this.

Gel