Paint on Me

by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist   Oct 4, 2016


My life is blank and pale
Fill me now with your paint.

It's up to you if it's a scenery or under the sea
What important is, you paint the world with me.

Grasp a brush and make a stroke,
Of a wild animal hiding behind the oak,

Or the fishes into the crystal clear water of the falls,
Acrylic, oil pastel, or watercolor?
It's up to you if you use it all.

Your hand began to move,
Color it all with a groove,

I'm the canvas and you're my paint
And you will never hear any complaint.

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  • 7 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    Very nicely constructed with the nice flow of love. This is a different kind of write. Lot's of imaginary hidden inside which I am very expert to explore.

    Nice work. I like the Author's footnote down there.

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Gel, this is a delicate piece and so unique that it pulls me in from start to finish.

    Painted the world with someone is what I would like to do but I need to find that special someone.

    All the best, Em

  • 7 years ago

    by Dean Kuch

    You've managed to create a perfect poetic proclamation portraying pure, profound love, Gel.
    The language you've used is eloquent, the feelings expressed--emotive.
    Bravo, word weaver, well done...
    ~Dean Kuch

  • 7 years ago

    by Dean Kuch

    You've managed to create a perfect poetic proclamation portraying pure, profound love, Gel.
    The language you've used is eloquent, the feelings expressed--emotive.
    Bravo, word weaver, well done...
    ~Dean Kuch

    • 7 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Hello Mr. Dean,

      thanks for the comment and for reading this. .
      By the way congratulations for the win. .

      Gel

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Gel,

    Lovely imagery here and beautifully laid out which makes the piece easy and pleasurable to read.

    Take care,

    Ben

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