Someday

by EVERLUCENT   Oct 30, 2016


I have a unique, smart and mysterious friend.
And We will always be together until the end.
She's cute, talented, pretty and sweet.
She loves me even I have a smelly feet.

We spend our time together talking about stuff.
We talk about bands, games except power puff.
We love coffee, marshmallows and sundae.
That's why we're gonna build a coffee shop someday.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    The pleasures mine

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Absolutely, Gel, I am always on hand to help if and when I can but to be honest, Gem, you're a lot better than you think.

  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    Hi there first off I would like to wish you a warm welcome. This is a beautiful piece with great unforced rhyming scheme. I like the personal touch to this it's lovely and many of us should have friends like this but as we grow older those friends become few and far between.

    1: A beautiful dedication to your dear friend.
    I think this line 'She loves me even I have a smelly feet' should have if between even and I so its reads 'She loves me even IF I have a smelly feet.'

    2: Lovely.
    All the best, Em

    • 9 years ago

      by EVERLUCENT

      Hi Em,

      Thank you for the warm welcome and for the comment. xoxo <3

      P.S I'm Gem BTW, Gel's sister

  • 9 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Wooohooo.. Proud sister here...
    Hey, Gem Why you let the fish out of the tank... it's supposed to be our secret...lol.. Sir ben will help you improve your writing skill... Right, Sir Ben?

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Firstly, may I just say a very warm welcome to the site.

    This is a lovely post from you. To be honest, I don't think enough friendship poetry is written on this site and I certainly don't read enough, but this is great and has a charming sprinkling of humour throughout.

    Well done and all the best,

    Ben

    *I've just noticed you're Gel's sister - an even warmer welcome!

    • 9 years ago

      by EVERLUCENT

      Hi Ben,

      Thank you! Hahahahah.

      She told me that you're a great poet too. I'm a little bit shy 'coz my poems doesn't have a firm foundation.So I really need a lot of editing and shit before I can actually post it.

      I am completely shocked when you noticed me, I mean wow. One of the greatest poets noticed me. I'm not that good in writing poems, because writing story is my thing.

      Again, thank you for the compliment.

      - Gem

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