Inferno ( senryu )

by Everlasting Nov 1, 2016 category : Life, society / inspirational

Life is an ice cube
floating in this glass of Earth
trying to cool it

L.L.

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8 years ago
by Em

I absolutely love this. Life can be so difficult and hard at times bur I guess it makes us stronger and one day we will crack it..

Em
8 years ago
by Ben Pickard

Excellent senryu, Lucero, with your own, inescapable originality interwoven.

I hope you are well,

Ben
- 8 years ago
  by Everlasting
  
  Thanks, so long as there's still some positivity in there, I'm pretty much okay.