Your heart beat (acrostic)

by Kasie   Jan 8, 2017


Your heart is like the
Ocean tides beating
Upon the shore
Rippling the sands.

Heeding the sweet rhythm of your heart,
Enchants and soothes my soul.
Addicted to the soft
Rhythm of your heart, I
Tremble.

Becoming hypnotized by
Each.......
And every........
Thump....

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  • 7 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hi Kasie,

    Your heart beat? hmmmn a tasteful acrostic here. .. I love it.. The opening was very powerful..as well as the closing. ..keep it up. ..

    5/5

    Gel

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Absolutely loving the layout. It's nice to see a creatively presented and written acrostic.

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you, I tried to make the ending sound like a heartbeat when you read it.

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Kasie,

    You will soon be rivalling Em for the award of 'most poems posted in a year', lol.

    In all seriousness, though, this is a beautiful little acrostic that was a joy to read.
    I haven't done one of these for ages, so I think I will try my hand some time.

    All the very best,

    Ben

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Lol thank you, I have insomnia so I write a couple poems every night.

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