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by tobias kinti   Apr 30, 2017


i asked whether
i could trace
the veins
on your
wrist with
my finger

but
you pulled away
and giggled
with that
fiery
glint
in your
eye

had i known then
that your veins
would lead me
to some kind
of hell

id have
pulled away
too

© tobiaskinti

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  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Tobias, I liked this a lot. As always your writes are so interesting. Well done-

  • 8 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Ohh wow!!!

    Your style of writing is refreshing!!!

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is excellent and will receive my nomination for the weekly contest tomorrow when my votes are recharged!

    Take care.

  • 8 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Whew! Love is in the air. :-) So honest. Great write!

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