A beautiful rhyming poem full of hope and promise. At first read with the message so clear and clean and the flawless rhyme scheme I wanted more, but having re read it a number of times the four stanzas is the right fit, making it a concise and powerful read. Totally captivated thank you!
3 years ago
I'm a little late to the celebration but congrats. Again beautiful imagery. Your command of tempo is impressive, I was tapping my foot as I read this.