Ren - I love this. It is amazing and raw and just wow..
Well done. xxxx

Cowgirl! This is so beautiful... So raw! This is captivating and excellently done! I love this!

This is absolutely lovely.

Mucho love button hitting and deffo favorites

Craig

'wound of my broken heart
ripped back open with the
force of forgotten promises'

Ren, phew! What an incredible piece and really resonated with me, and I love that :)
Fab writing lady :)

A really well written piece, Ren. The ending is spot on and highly effective.

All the best as ever,

Ben

OMG this brought a tear to my eye!!

Omg ren. I can literally feel the heartbreak in this piece like holy crap.
I'm glad this has been nominated.

this resonates really deeply with me. I loved the ending especially

Ren, Wow to this write. You tore me apart with every thought you put into this. It brings all lost love and failed relationships right there and smacks you in the face. Love this!

Amazing piece. Visuals and emotions conveyed brilliantly. A masterpiwce

I love your poems! :)

This is beautifully written. Thoroughly enjoyed it

Hey Miss Ren
Well done on your HM :)

Michael

Holy smokes I am speechless.

God damn girl! This gave me chills! What a powerful and beautiful poem. It took my breath away completely. Your writing is just flawless as always. Absolutely love this! Congrats on the HM!

Nani :)

This is amazing

Judging comment

"You Asked Me..." By Ren 7 points

A breathtakingly beautiful write, which once started takes the reader on a journey of sheer delight.

The entire work sets the reader up for the ending, which is definitely an oh moment.

The whole thing links together in a perfect way, It is just unfortunate that things of beauty can so often be tinged with sadness. However the sadness in this poem does not detract from the enjoyment of its reading.

Well done (7)