My Apology

by AngelaLuisaCory   Aug 12, 2017

Hand in hand with summer rays
The ice spins frozen dew.
It knits a web around my heart
Which keeps me now from you.
I cannot see the image now
Of what I thought was true.
The shadow twines with ivy leaves
And mingles with deep blue.


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  • 2 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Beautiful piece full of imagery and soul. It's emotion weaves a spell that could melt the stoniest of heart. Milly x

  • 2 years ago

    by AngelaLuisaCory

    Thank you. x

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A very neat and well rhymed piece which flows like water over glass.

    Love Ben

  • 2 years ago

    by AngelaLuisaCory

    Em. Thank you for your comments. That's precisely what it was meant to sound like! Very intuitive of you! X

  • 2 years ago

    by Em

    This is astounding work and sometimes we have to wrap up our hearts so they don't get hurt again. I like the upbeaty rhythm to this - if read aloud it seems like a heart beating quickly which is pretty awesome.

    Take care
    Em x

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