Comments : I'M FINE!

  • 2 years ago

    by Brenda

    Oh Kitty, I am so sad...when a relationship ends there's so much unfinished business. Even though it is probably for the best it's still hard not to fall back into that groove. I'm sending you strength and hugs-

    • 2 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Brenda thank you x hugs always welcome :-)
      =^.^=

  • 2 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    KITTY!!! I feel you, girl. Sorry I know this is sad but I related with this very much.

  • 2 years ago

    by Paul Hirst

    Unsaid pain lovely write

  • 2 years ago

    by Em

    Totally dig this

  • 2 years ago

    by Michael

    Miss Kitty Cat
    I absolutely love this, sad as it reads but such a wonderful flow with your emotions
    Much love
    Michael :) x

    • 2 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks Michael, I appreciate that :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 2 years ago

    by Mark

    KitKat this is great rhyming. I adore the idea of having a piece called 'I'm fine!'

  • 2 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Congratulations on another well deserved win. I love your rhyming style and the messages within your poems. Well done. Milly x

    • 2 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks so much Milly ... I'm thrilled! :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 2 years ago

    by Michael

    Go get them Miss Kitty K :))

    Front page news again, absolutely so pleased for you

    Much love
    Michael :)x

    • 2 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Oh thanks Michael ... it's really made my day! :-) :-) x =^.^=

  • 2 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Kitty...congratulations on your win!

  • 2 years ago

    by Brenda

    Congratulations on your front page win!

  • 2 years ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    You are on a roll. Well done, Kitty.

  • 2 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Congratulations, kitty Kat lady

  • 2 years ago

    by Mark

    Loved this when I first read the title and I still do. Well done KitKat!

    • 2 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thank you Mark ... this was one I really needed to get out of my system! X
      =^.^=

  • 2 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Congrats on the win

  • 2 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Congrats on your win.

    • 2 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks so much again for nominating me Dagmar :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 2 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    That line "I'm Fine" its always taken for granted I feel
    and when anyone hears it or even the guy in one's life just
    takes it for granted and leaves it at that. If one really cares and
    listens to the tone when said "I'm fine" will be able to pick
    up the tinge of pain behind it. But this write shows that this
    guy prefers to leave it rather then solve it.

    A sad write...hope you are okay, take care...

    Congrats on the Win :)

    • 2 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Hi Meena, thanks so much for your insightful comments, I'm so bloomin' pleased it won :-)
      Sadly it does reflect an 'end' but I'm all good! x
      =^.^=

  • 2 years ago

    by Justen Smith

    I get that. This poem is so true, sometimes I'm fine is because we dont want to admit a weakness. But just because we can't admit it doesn't mean we are not screaming for help.

  • 1 year ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Judging comment

    "I'm Fine" By Kitty Cat Lady (4 points)

    "I'm Fine"

    The fall back answer many will so often give when they simply are not.

    Pride, stubbornness and the desire to show that we don't need that significant other can initiate this response.
    Inside we could be screaming "help me please" but I'm fine, OK or good is what will trip tongues.
    However it means more. It shows an inner strength, a will and an attitude that will overcome.

    I really liked this poem and it's rhyming. Very well worded and an excellently worked powerful piece.

    Well done (4)

    • 1 year ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks so much for this. I'm guessing your term as a judge is over and I'm really grateful to you and all the judges for your time :-)
      I was so thrilled to win with this poem, so thank you for choosing it and for your great comments xx
      Kitty =^.^=

  • 1 year ago

    by h0peful

    "I'm fine" is the most commonly told lie in the universe.

    I am inclined to believe it.

    • 1 year ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      I know! Funny how we communicate sometimes eh?
      Thanks H :-)
      =^.^=

  • 1 year ago

    by Artur Kraus

    Beautiful piece about the thought process of the one being asked and the one asking..
    "I'm fine" saves a lot of trouble, which is what the one asking is most likely after - a quick way out.
    Too bad this question and answer can't be taken seriously

    • 1 year ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Exactly Artur ... a silly game but played all too often! Thanks for your comments :-)
      =^.^=