This is extremely beautiful (the imagery you portray) but is so sad in its nostalgia

Oh Mark, this is just lovely. It's so sad too. Your visuals are spot on, the story weaves seamlessly. Well done-

I love how you weave your spells Mark. Beautiful! x
=^.^=

Dude,

Kinda picked up on this one a little late as it is here.

It's a beautiful poem and a fitting tribute to your friend.

Dips ones head

Craig

Mark - I just "stumbled" across this.. and im glad I did.
Its a beautiful tribute to obviously someone close to you.

Well done, im glad its nominated.

Wow! This is sadness expressed in the most captivating way. Such vocabulary, Mark.

Beautiful. This is an amazing write I think one of your best and definitley warrants the nomination. Loved the visuals and the emotional journey. Well done. Milly x

A deep and sad poem of a young love which still lives
in your heart...and everything about this love haunts because
of the deeply etched memories...

The repetition of Sarah Marie makes this poem so life like
its as if you are always calling out her name for everything you
touch, see and experience it is her...beautifully sad..