Questions

by Jenn   Jul 10, 2004


I know it's not that good it sucks

Have you ever known someone you hate and when they need a friend every one hates them too? What do you do?

What do you say when you love someone but don't know if they love you back, what should you say?

What should someone do when life seems to end, should they end it?

When someone breaks my heart what should I do?
Should I try to get him back? I know that's what I want.
Should I forget him maybe try to move on? Or just give up and admit that this is the end of us?

When my dad gets mad, or my friend is so so sad what do I do?

I have so many questions I'm so confused what can I do.
I'm a helpless teen in a world of s*x and drugs perpreasure and fear. Why are we like this?

Why do we kill, or steal? Or maybe why do people hurt them selves?
Why do we fight and cry or hide? Why? why? why?

I'm sick of asking why and no one answering my cries, I'm done it's over that's all I have left so if you can answer my questions and hear my cries, my heart is dieing, and I am crying?. What can I do?

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  • 19 years ago

    by little girl all alone

    that was a gr8 poem bj and ann marie that was also good.

  • 19 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    You did a great job expressing your feelings, BJ.... this does NOT suck!!

    Poems don't always have to rhyme or have a certain rhythm... lots of people write free verse.

    But if you want to make a more traditional type poem, take all these feeling you have written down and find a common thread (the common thread I see here is that you always ask a question) Put those questions at the beginning of each line... that will give it a form... Here is a suggestion for the first few stanzas…..if you want more help, feel free to email me

    What do you do…
    When someone you hate
    Needs a friend too?

    What do you say…
    When the one that you love
    Doesn’t feel the same way?

    What should you do…
    When life seems to end
    Is death overdue?