I had a quick read through your poetry. I think it’s difficult to pigeonhole you, as your style changes quite a lot. I loved this, though. I enjoy the mystery of the first stanza, and the metaphor is strong. Alone, it would also be an awesome poem. Not that the second stanza isn’t good or it doesn’t add anything but the imagery is more obvious. It’s...prettier.
You penned a wonderful piece here. I really enjoy this style of poem. I would nominate it if I could!