Comments : A fathers pledge. (Rondeau)

  • 5 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a beautifully done poem, Michael, in content and form. You are becoming the site master at these.

    All the best as ever

    • 5 months ago

      by Michael

      Nice words Ben, thank you fella :)

  • 5 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Beautiful and tender, just how this form should be.

    • 5 months ago

      by Michael

      ..like a good steak ;) Thanks Mr D

  • 5 months ago

    by DarkNDangerous

    This is very well done. I could feel the raw emotion in this.

    • 5 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you for reading D&D :)

  • 5 months ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Absolutely wonderful. Nominated. All the very best to you

    • 5 months ago

      by Michael

      Bless you Miss Dagmar, thank you :)x

  • 5 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    Now that's the warmth and beauty of a father...giving his all
    and everything to protect his child no matter what or come what may.
    Nicely penned!

    • 5 months ago

      by Michael

      Indeed, thank you Meena :)x

  • 5 months ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, you really have taken a shine to these...This is so lovely and loving . Your words to your child shows the depth of love you have. It truly is beautiful.

    • 5 months ago

      by Michael

      Ah thank you Miss Brenda :)x

  • 5 months ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This reads so calmly to me and your words are soothing. Sincerely written and emotional because I can't help but think of these "pledges" parents make, and the longing of a child to be sheltered and supported even through difficult times. I feel like as a child, I worried if I would face that rejection or sudden coldness as I grew and learned who I was becoming.

    • 5 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you MA, and your comments resonate :)x

  • 5 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Beautiful. Beautiful. Beautiful. Stolen from the heart of every parent Michael. It's perfect :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 5 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Kitty :)x

  • 5 months ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Added to my faves.. This is a beautiful piece Michael and one I hope your children have read. Take care x

    • 5 months ago

      by Michael

      Yes they have and Thanks Em :)x

  • 5 months ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Very heartwarming, only dedicated father's could pen such.

    • 5 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Ken, and for reading :)

  • 5 months ago

    by Mark

    Beautiful Michael

    • 5 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Mark :)