Comments : Aww ( 9 syllables)

  • 5 months ago

    by (Olwin ) Lee Mcdonald

    This is just beautiful! I love " splashes smiles" and can just envisage the little one smiling away while they splash!
    VERY cute poem that is so well executed in so little words!

  • 5 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    There is something so adorable about babies splashing around in a pool and they always seem so happy that you cant help but smile back. Millyx

  • 5 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Baby splashing the smiles that smile back at him. Nice image.

  • 5 months ago

    by Brenda

    Awww, so sweet! I remember those days.

  • 5 months ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Perfect imagery!

  • 5 months ago

    by Michael

    Such a beautiful image, only you as a mother can capture in that precise moment of joy :)
    Lovely Everlasting, M x

  • 5 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Well done, Lucero. Deserved win.

  • 5 months ago

    by Star

    What a cute little poem, not sure how I missed it!! Congrats on the win ^_^

  • 5 months ago

    by Michael

    Congratulations on your win! :)

  • 5 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    You are the queen of 9 syllable poems. Well done, a great job, truly. x

  • 5 months ago

    by [M(/)U]

    I really like this :)

  • 5 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    Congrats on this heart smiling write my dear! :)
    take care...kisses and hugs to Allison..