Thank you, though I have so much I can work on! I've been writing a few prose pieces and kind of sitting on them. I realize I use a lot of prepositions and having been kind of balancing that out, seeing what works and where I can improve by "tightening" the verses so to speak. I think the main thing is releasing that emotion and not restricting the words, then going back and evaluating, does this really repeat itself? Is this part unnecessary?