Comments : Not a poem, just an echo.

  • 4 weeks ago

    by hiraeth

    I'm so glad this is nominated. I don't want to dig deep into this since it's feels super personal, but I will say this is extremely well-written. I hope writing this brought you some solace :)

    • 4 weeks ago

      by Poet on the Piano

      It did bring me some solace, thank you so much, Mark. Especially being able to put it into words, I don't know what I would do if I couldn't have gotten that out. <3

  • 4 weeks ago

    by BOB GALLO

    You are such a great writer. Not only the structure but also the "space" in your writing is very airy and fine.

    • 4 weeks ago

      by Poet on the Piano

      Thank you, though I have so much I can work on! I've been writing a few prose pieces and kind of sitting on them. I realize I use a lot of prepositions and having been kind of balancing that out, seeing what works and where I can improve by "tightening" the verses so to speak. I think the main thing is releasing that emotion and not restricting the words, then going back and evaluating, does this really repeat itself? Is this part unnecessary?

      Thanks for reading!