Omg, love this! Your visuals print these picture, dreamlike. Nominated!

nice to see you back, bringing your wonderful poetry, wisdom, love and energy back to this site.

They will teach this in classes worldwide as a lesson in the art of alliteration, Alfred! Great piece

Love that this is not only an acrostic, but also an exercise in alliteration! Clever :)

In some lines, it did feel a little unnatural, a little crammed with one too many adverbs/adjectives that crowded the piece, but I really had fun reading this and the effort I'm sure went into it.

Quite the alliterative acrostic you've got here. ;)

Not sure if I'm able to interpret the poem correctly as there seems to be quite some ambiguity.. But the adjectives of conflict make me feel like there is a heavy struggle going on. Perhaps one of mental entrapment, fighting one's demons?

I agree with MaryAnne that some spaces feel crowded and force you into more abstract wording, although I do appreciate a bit of symbolism here and there.. Untangling the riddle so to speak. My favourite line was probably "Wrapped within wounded wishes", kind of simple but vividly strong.

Congrats on your win.

I like the mixture you have put into this acrostic and the layout - it took some time to figure out it was an acrostic and what more the visuals a d word play makes it...interesting. Congrats on the win!

Superb!!!

A flames of bright moon light will shine upon the shadow at night sky.