QUICKSAND

by Guilty By Design   Feb 18, 2020


Everyone tells you to be positive
Little do they know you’re living in quicksand
Every time you try to save yourself
You only bury yourself alive a little more at a time
It’s so easy for people to give advice
When they’re not the one’s sinking
Everyone tells you to be positive
Little do they know you’re living in quicksand.

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  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Well, here I am not giving you advice and wretched cliches that you don't need if you're feeling low. I will say, however, that I completely understand this and sometimes a little understanding is really all we need to feel better.

    Stay well,

    Ben

    • 4 years ago

      by Guilty By Design

      I feel like sometimes people don’t need advice, they just want to be heard. Basically the reason I wrote this, just a venting session but I’m alright :)

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