Comments : The Nicest Thing.

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This genuinely moved me immensely, MA.

    "We didn't know lust could be innocent"

    Just one of the many lines I could have picked from this wonderful (and wonderfully refreshing) piece.

    Take care.

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Brenda

    Love this Mary Anne!

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Tony Grannell

    Hello, Poet on the Piano,
    Love in a whirlwind of tragedies and when there is no one else, there is always us. A beautiful movement to this poem without being repetitious, gracing into each stanza with the poetics of love, lust, loss and innocence. Truly wonderful writing. Praises galore.
    Regards, Tony.

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Some incredibly moving lines - innocence and unrequited love. Beautiful. Milly x

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Tony Grannell

    Hello, Poet on the Piano,
    Very well done, a fitting win and wholly deserved.
    Kind regards, Tony.

  • 1 week ago

    by nourayasmine

    I love this:
    "too afraid and ashamed to do more
    than place our problems in ink."

    Such a heartbreaking poem.

  • 3 days ago

    by Meena Krish

    Your words bring such vivid imagery to the mind, a touching write. Congrats on the win

  • 1 day ago

    by Brittany Ottmo

    ***We shared our secrets, slept with razors
    in bed, wrote poems to our addictions,
    too afraid and ashamed to do more
    than place our problems in ink. ***

    This part right here. ?? Love! I don’t know why it gripped me so eagerly, maybe the part about writing poems to our addictions, but I love it. The memories, the vivid pictures you brought out with this poem, all amazing! Great Write! ????