Comments : napowrimo 24 - Teatime

  • 1 month ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I'll nominate this later when the site recycles, Rania.
    In honesty, the poem flowed so smoothly but I did fined the last line a little clunky. Maybe 'you are no longer my cup of tea' without the commas as maybe it's those that are interrupting the flow. Not sure, but either way, I love this.

    Take care and all the best

  • 1 month ago

    by Mr. Rious

    Nice visuals, intense emotions! Love this a lot!

    Best regards,
    Mr. Rious

  • 1 month ago

    by hiraeth

    I like how you flipped the saying 'cup of tea' into something way more substantial, giving it breath even if it's sad. Glad this was nominated :)

  • 1 month ago

    by nourayasmine

    Love this.

  • 1 month ago

    by nourayasmine

    Dammit, people. How do you nominate everything so fast? Lol.

  • 4 weeks ago

    by cassie hughes

    Love this. A great twist on 'a cup of tea'. A very well deserved win.