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This speak’s volumes to me!
The ending lines strangely make me feel heavy hearted, like I know how it feels yet I dont.
Thats rambling I know, but this poem is soo good it really is!
by Rania Moallem
Thank you for your touching comment. That's not rambling at all.
by BOB GALLO
I hope your strength insult your ego!!
I can't believe star got to nominate this before me :(
<3 humbled by your kindness
I see Rania, I meant::
I hop you let your strength, instead of your naivety, insult your ego...in the dark.
I can let my naivety insult my ego
in the dark.
oh thank you ..Indeed I wish!
I love the imagery of the whole poem. My favorite line: “ But I can't let you see my pain scattered like powder in the light.” So beautiful!