This speak’s volumes to me!
The ending lines strangely make me feel heavy hearted, like I know how it feels yet I dont.
Thats rambling I know, but this poem is soo good it really is!

I hope your strength insult your ego!!

I can't believe star got to nominate this before me :(

I see Rania, I meant::
I hop you let your strength, instead of your naivety, insult your ego...in the dark.

reflecting on

I can let my naivety insult my ego
in the dark.

I love the imagery of the whole poem. My favorite line: “ But I can't let you see my pain scattered like powder in the light.” So beautiful!

I am broken but my pieces are whole

This is my favorite line

-katrynn