Comments : Limits

  • 2 years ago

    by Star

    This speak’s volumes to me!
    The ending lines strangely make me feel heavy hearted, like I know how it feels yet I dont.
    Thats rambling I know, but this poem is soo good it really is!

    • 2 years ago

      by Rania

      Thank you for your touching comment. That's not rambling at all.

  • 2 years ago

    by BOB GALLO

    I hope your strength insult your ego!!

  • 2 years ago

    by prasanna

    I can't believe star got to nominate this before me :(

    • 2 years ago

      by Rania

      <3 humbled by your kindness

  • 2 years ago

    by BOB GALLO

    I see Rania, I meant::
    I hop you let your strength, instead of your naivety, insult your ego...in the dark.

    reflecting on

    I can let my naivety insult my ego
    in the dark.

    • 2 years ago

      by Rania

      oh thank you ..Indeed I wish!

  • 1 year ago

    by Oceanloveisland

    I love the imagery of the whole poem. My favorite line: “ But I can't let you see my pain scattered like powder in the light.” So beautiful!

  • 1 year ago

    by Katrynn

    I am broken but my pieces are whole

    This is my favorite line

    -katrynn