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by Bobby M.Peter Jun 27, 2020
Friendship, family /
Strong wind comes.
Wind of hope ;Uprooted the thorns.
Flowers the desert
by rain of kindness.
No thorns now but flowers any where .
In the place of sadness and struggle,
comes the goodness and blessings now.
by Milly Hayward
Its a nice metaphor hope for flowers after the thorns and in the place of sadness and struggle comes the goodness and blessings now. Its what we all need right now. Milly x
by Meena Krish
Not bad..I liked it. You seem to write short poetry messages and I've been reading them.
Just a thought, this line:
"No thorns now but flowers any where"
^^did you mean every where..? That would make sense. Other then that nice read.
Take care ~