Comments : Life's Path

  • 4 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Milly this is a beautiful piece and so poignant to think that any change in any part of your life before meeting your great love, could have prevented that from happening. Lovely! :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 4 months ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you :) Each age group faces different challenges and adversities which help mould the person that we eventually become. So if I was to eradicate all the challenges I have faced then I would also eradicate the good that came from those challenges and risk being a different person who perhaps never found that love. Too high a price for me :) xx

  • 4 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    This is such a heart warming love poem. The gratitude and peace is felt in each line and with perfect rhyme! Well done and good to see a new poem from you. Take care ~

    • 4 months ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thankyou Meena for your lovely comments and your warm welcome back. Its been a while since I felt like writing so its really nice to see its bringing enjoyment. Milly x

  • 4 months ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Wonderful poem Millie, I agree with Meena, metaphorical rhyme gets big Headlines in my Paper! very heart felt expressions, a Soul revealing pent up feelings. Added to my Favorites!

    • 4 months ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thankyou Ken for the lovely comments they mean a lot. Im really very happy that you liked it enougb to put it on your favourites. Milly x

  • 4 months ago

    by Ocean Chant

    I really enjoyed this, it felt like that sun you mentioned popped up throughout this reading, so thank you :)

  • 4 months ago

    by Walter

    Such a pleasant read Milly and I enjoyed sharing your journey while reading your poem, As always, beautifully written and well-expressed! x

  • 4 months ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I thought that was really great. Interesting lines, with wonderful rhymes woven through a flawless rhythm. The message and story, too were a joy to behold. Great work

  • 4 months ago

    by William Mae

    Beautiful write, the journey we take in life is a road we choose so at it’s completion it’s wonderful to be satisfied with how we traveled it. Just a great job writing this piece.

  • 4 months ago

    by Gracy Judith

    A very well-written poem depicting life's journey and the importance of the support of a loved one . With a loved one by your side, you can brave all storms life weaves. Loved it!
    Cheers x

  • 3 months ago

    by Emi

    Milly, this is beautiful xx

  • 3 months ago

    by Matt Carroll

    Well-written and refreshing. Excellent.