Shattered

by Stuart   Jul 13, 2004


A teardrop of darkness falls from above,
it hits the rock bottom and shatters all love,
the darkness engulfs all hearts so pure,
with a loss so great youd swear it was yours,
hearts get broken lives get lost,
if only everyone knew this this was the cost.

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  • 19 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    can't believe you praised yourself *shakes head*. oh well, it was true! another short poem- yay for me! off to the second part... take care:)

  • 19 years ago

    by BaybeBlew

    That was really good, you have a typo in the end there I think. I really liked the first two lines, but the whole thing was really awesome. Keep writing.
    Love,

    -Blew ^_~.

  • 19 years ago

    by nikki

    that was awesome, keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by kellie goldman

    Wow! Great poem.. Hope you keep up the great work... =]

  • 19 years ago

    by Stuart

    WOW URE SUCH AN AWESOME POET LOL

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