The inconsolable Sky : ( Experiment: Secundus Paeon )

by Everlasting   Mar 22, 2021




Because the inconsolable and thunderous
encourages a mountain to be innumerous
The mountain has decided to collapse too soon
And now it is a hill of some more hills so small
that wish to once again be like before as tall

di DuM di di, di Dum di di, di DuM di di

Secundus paeon: short-long-short-short

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  • 3 years ago

    by Keira Pickard

    I really enjoyed it, it has another interesting form :)

    • 3 years ago

      by Everlasting

      I’m trying a different type of meter.
      The most common meter use is iambic. di DUM
      This one is di DUM di di so it should create a different melody

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