you will move through

Let your lungs remember there is oxygen

^^

Now that's poetry, and so very true, We could all do with reminding our lungs that.

Take care and all the very best,
Ben

"...let your lungs remember there is oxygen" Sometimes we get so bound up with life that we forget to breathe. I like this poem, especially, the tree shape - i am not sure if this is deliberate, but it does lend itself to the theme of oxygen and time/life.

Nice work.