Two Cages (Senryu)

by ddavidd   Apr 30, 2023


There's the cage of those
who lack reason, and those who're
enmeshed in their vales.

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  • 11 months ago

    by Oceanloveisland

    I see “enmeshed in their vales” (beautifully put!) as being trapped in intricate overly complicated perceptions. So going from not reasoning to over thinking. Both an imblance and loss of truth.

    • 11 months ago

      by ddavidd

      Dear Amanda I know the way this little piece is handled could have two different meanings. What I meant was the second group are imprisoned in the first group's reasonless world.
      Thanks for reading

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