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by Walter Sep 16, 2023 category : Love, romance / lasting love
It is my favourite picture The one I took of you When we were at the beach With sky and water blue The sand which was so white Reflections of the sun And we were both relaxing In nature having fun When your skin would glisten From swimming in the sea And you were sitting on the sand Relaxed and so carefree Building a sand castle By using just your hands As you were in your element And built a structure grand When I walked up towards you After cooling from a swim You just seemed so absorbed With sand on every limb While you're in your moment Not noticing I was there When reaching for my camera As you became aware I only took one photo Just as your face would smirk With your hands upon your castle So proud of your hard work This was many years ago And your castle is long gone But memories that you built that day Forever will go on...
by Eros
You're definitely my favourite around here. Always seamless lines and rhymes; interesting storytelling; effortless writing, imageries and metaphors. Keep up and take care, Walter. Hugs.
by Walter
Thank you so much Eros for reading and your kind comments!