Dreaming under the star lights...

by Allen   Jul 18, 2004


During the time of the star lights
Thinking of your sparking eyes
Wanting to see deeper
To where your thoughts and love lies

Thinking of your voice
That echoes through my mind
Breaks me from my dreams
On the bluest night

Your smile warms me
When it's in my sight
Lit my soul on fire
Let my heart set flight

Oh how I long for your embrace
But I can only dream
Under the lonely moon shine
Wishing you were mine

*:) I guess this would be the first love poem I have ever writen... please leave comments and criticism as to what you think of it and how I can improve ;)*

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  • 19 years ago

    by jennifer

    Nice poem

  • 19 years ago

    by MeL JoY

    thats beautiful

  • 19 years ago

    by Allen

    :) Thank you everyone for your kind words, ...wow... its been 3 month since my first love poem, and sadly Im still writing "secret love" about the same special girl... oh well :) Once again, thank you all soooo much for commenting on this piece, it really means alot to me :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Rachael/7MidniteTears

    I kinda love it the way it is, its got beat and it leaves me speechlesss on what else i have to say. all i say now is that you have a wonderful talent and just keep writing,

  • 19 years ago

    by Allen

    ROTFLMAO, oh you are a good one Jay ;) "cant have light and darkness at the same time"... I guess I come across not being the romanic type... errr... since you are a guy, I don't think you'll see/experience my romanic side... ;) you know what Im saying :D:D Thanks for commenting bro :D

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