Death

I like that, describes how i feel alot, good job

I could feel the despair and hopelessness in this write. I dont critque other ppls poems, because I don't feel I'm qualified, but I wish you would have wrote the word damn, because it would have added that extra anger/passion a person would need to actually kill him or herself. Not adding it outright doesn't take away from the write, but adding it would have made it more powerful!

It's still excellent write dude;)

i like that, the explicitness makes it more raw and emotional. That is excellent, God you have a lot of talent. And just a suggestion but readin books often gives me inspiration or listening to songs or thinking bout previous stuuf that has happened to me, hope that helps ;)

Again, another nice poem, but next time if you're going to curse in it, you miiiiiiight want to stick it in explicit, else you get all those little asterisks.

--Bryce~

Hey, I'm sorry that you feel this way, but if your thinking about it, don't kill yourself. Everyone is put here for a reason. There can be really tough times, but goodness will shine through if you give it a chance. Hope everything works out. Personally, I think you should keep writing. Maybe use it as a venting tool to get those feelings out. good luck